Chapter 14: Predators and Paperwork | Dunmoor’s Definitely Doomed

The cooper’s yard held the heat like a cupped hand. Sunlight broke against the high plank walls and fell in dull strips across stacked barrels, the air thick with the sour-sweet tang of pitch and wet wood. Beyond the gate, Kaethar pressed in with the steady appetite of a thing too large to notice who it had stepped on. Voices rose and fell. Wheels ground over stone. Somewhere farther off, a man shouted hard enough to make it clear he’d been ignored more than once already. Here, the noise blurred into a low, constant thrum that never quite faded. Even in the shade, it felt as if something lingered just beyond the walls, waiting for them to move.

The grathok lay crooked on the sledge where they had hauled it, all straps, iron hooks, and dead weight. One of the leather bands had loosened along the flank. The hide there bulged against the slack, a dark seam opening where it had been tight before, the strap creaking softly whenever the sledge shifted. Zerai had not taken her eyes off it for more than a heartbeat at a time since.

Thane noticed that, and because he was Thane, decided the kindest thing he could offer was contempt.

“If it twitches again,” he said, rubbing the heel of his hand over the front of his throat, “I’m setting it on fire and callin’ the whole thing solved.”

Zerai let out a short breath through her nose. “That may be the first useful thing you’ve said all day.”

“It’s definitely the cleanest.”

Elora would have smiled at that yesterday. Now she only looked toward the alley mouth where Vale had disappeared, her face gone thoughtful in the way it did when something offended her mind before it offended her morals.

“He wasn’t trying to stop us,” she said.

Thane turned toward her. “Felt an awful lot like he was.”

“No.” She shook her head, still watching the lane as if the answer might come back through it, wearing the same coat. “If he wanted the carcass seized, he could have brought guards. If he wanted it delayed, he could have named a law and made us spend the afternoon arguing with a clerk. He came to see whether what he’d heard was real. Once he knew it was, he left us with a warning instead of an order.”

Zerai folded her arms tighter. “That just sounds like blackmail.”

Tako rested one heavy hand on the sledge rail and dipped his head, almost as though listening to something inside the wood. “Hunter smelled blood,” he said. “Did not bite. Not yet.”

Lira looked at him, then back to the lane. “He knew too much to ignore.”

Thane rolled one shoulder until it popped. “I’m not saying ignore him. I’m saying I don’t like turning sideways every time some city bastard speaks in warnings.”

“You don’t like cities,” Elora said.

“I love cities. Some of my favorite places to get drunk are in cities. I just don’t like where people stack up their lies so they don’t have to smell ‘em one at a time.”

That got the smallest shift out of her. The corner of her mouth lifted. It did not stay long, but it stayed long enough for Lira to see how worn the woman still was.

Lira pushed off the runner and straightened. “We followed the vote. Fine. Now we follow the warning just far enough to understand what, exactly, decided to notice us.”

“And if that leads somewhere uglier than Malakar?” Elora asked.

Lira held her gaze. “Then I’d rather know it before we carry the body back to him.

For a moment, nobody answered. Beyond the fence, Kaethar kept grinding on with the same appetite it had before they ever arrived. Then Thane gave one hard nod. “Alright,” he said. “But if this turns into us chasing whispers through alleys while that thing rots on the sled, I’m done being patient.”

“Wonderful,” Zerai muttered. “We’ll mark the moment in history.”

Lira ignored her and started for the alley mouth. Behind her, boots shifted, and wood creaked. Tako’s hand left the rail.

Vale’s name moved through Kaethar like something passed hand to hand with the fingertips. Nobody held it long. A porter jerked his chin toward a broker’s lane without breaking stride. The broker sent them past a cooperage with a shrug that cost him nothing. A woman chalking prices onto a hanging board looked at Tako, looked at Thane, then changed her mind halfway through honesty and pointed them one row over instead. By then, Lira stopped listening to the directions and started listening to what sat underneath them. The city was not confused. It was careful.

The office sat in a row of buildings so respectable they nearly erased one another. A cooper’s yard with hoops hanging in the doorway. A broker’s room with blue paint peeling in tired strips. Then this narrow little throat of a place between them, its windows polished, its step scrubbed, its brass plate bright enough to catch the afternoon and give nothing back.

MARKET ASSESSMENT AND TRANSFER.

Thane stopped right in front of it and stared up at the sign with the kind of disbelief that usually came right before violence.

“That’s not a real job.”

Zerai looked at the plate, then at the door, then at the spotless windows. “No, it’s worse. It’s real enough for someone to get paid for it.”

“Bureaucracy,” Tako said with a grumble.

Everybody stopped and turned their heads at Tako.

“Did he just use a big word?” Lira asked.

“Yeah! Four syllables!” Zerai yipped.

Inside, the room had been built to make visitors feel temporary. The counter ran high and straight. Shelves climbed the back wall in dense ranks, all ledgers, waxed rolls, lacquered boxes, and little tied packets labeled in a hand so neat it made Lira want to see what sort of person wrote it, if only to dislike them properly. The whole place smelled of paper, sealing wax, and old dust pressed flat under years of orderly hands.

A woman in green sleeves looked up from a tall desk, her posture straight and composed as though she had been carved into place rather than seated there. Shea appeared to be in her autumn years, human, with pale skin that had seen more lamplight than sun. The sleeves themselves were a deep, muted green, finely tailored and unwrinkled, their cuffs fastened with small brass clasps that caught the light whenever she moved. Her dark brown hair was drawn back tightly into a severe knot, not a strand out of place, and her eyes—sharp, gray, and unblinking—held the careful neutrality of someone accustomed to weighing every word before allowing it into the air. Even the way she lifted her gaze felt deliberate, as if she were cataloging them the moment they crossed her line of sight, filing away details with quiet, practiced precision.

She did not blink at Tako’s size. She did not flinch at the dirt on Lira’s boots or the fact that Elora stood like the only person in the room who still remembered what good manners were. She didn’t even flinch at Thane’s face, with its old, poorly healed scars pulling one side of his mouth into a permanent half-sneer and the flattened bridge of his nose that spoke of breaks never properly set. Her gaze moved once across them and settled. Whatever judgments she made, she kept them to herself.

We’re looking for Berris Vale,” Elora said.

The woman folded her hands. “On what matter?”

“His,” Thane said, refusing to rise onto his toes even though it left his eyes barely peering over the counter. 

The woman’s attention shifted to him without any visible sign that it had shifted at all. “Deputy Vale is unavailable.”

Zerai leaned one elbow on the counter and smiled the way some people smile when they are trying to decide whether to charm you or rob you. “That’s a shame. Is he unavailable in general, or just unavailable to people hauling a dead grathok through Spice Row?”

There it was: a tightening so slight it could have been missed if Lira had not already been looking for it. In the room beyond, a chair leg scraped once across the floorboards and stopped.

Elora heard it, too. She held the lock on the clerk’s eyes with her own. “We’re not here to make trouble,” she said, and somehow managed to make that sound less like a lie than a courtesy. “We’re trying to understand how a market assessor recognized preservation markings at a glance.”

The woman rested one fingertip against the desk, lifted it, then set both hands together again. “If Deputy Vale addressed you in the street, I assumed he had reason.”

“He did,” Lira retorted. “Now I’d like his.”

Silence stretched just far enough to become deliberate. At last, the woman reached for a ledger and opened it with calm, careful hands. She ran one finger down the page without once looking at the ink. The gesture was meant to do more than occupy her fingers. It reminded everyone in the room that answers here belonged to the structure, not the person speaking them.

“Licensed containment routes exist for a reason,” she said with a roll of her eyes. “Bonded movement. Hazard Transfer. Private handling. Temple quarantine. Guild seizure.”

Thane’s jaw worked once. “That a warning?”

Her eyes came up, cool and certain. “It’s policy.”

The front door snapped open behind them and made the bell twitch without ringing. The figure who stepped in did not glance around first. A hood shadowed the creature’s face, but it did little to hide the truth—the silver-scaled snout that pushed forward beneath it marked it as something other than human. Creatures who were uncertain looked around; this one did not. It entered as though the room would make space for it and let everyone else adjust. 

It wore dark, well-kept armor beneath a darker coat cut close to the body, the leather and plate fitted so precisely they moved as one. The color drew the eye first. The rest followed. Broad shoulders. Hands resting near the haft of a heavy maul at his side. A jaw built hard even before the black line of scale along either side sharpened it further. The face belonged to someone who had learned early that stillness could do more damage than bluster if you held it hard enough. The creature’s eyes held forward, yet missed nothing.

The clerk behind the desk changed before anyone else did. Her spine straightened, and her mouth thinned.

“Votary Karen,” she said. “This office does not handle devotional petitions.”

“So I’m told. Where is your supervisor?”

The voice was deep and rough at the edges; it arrived with more weight than language alone should carry. Flat. Certain. The name sat strangely against it. Karen. For the briefest beat, it caught the ear wrong, almost absurdly so, until the rest of her made the sound settle into something else entirely. It was almost feminine, though not soft—clearly a foreign name.

Karen stepped farther in.

“Tell Vale I’m done finding his shadow where his face should be.”

The clerk’s fingers tightened on the ledger. “Deputy Vale is unavailable.”

Karen gave the smallest nod, as if confirming a point in an argument already won. “Then tell him he’s getting slower.”

Thane shifted his weight and turned toward the newcomer. “You sure know how to make an entrance, don’t you?”

Karen’s eyes moved to him.

“When the floor has footprints on it.”

Elora’s brows lifted. “That’s a very dramatic way to say you’re looking for someone, ma’am.”

Thane’s face popped in shock. “‘Ma’am?’ You mean that thing’s a lady? I thought she was a man-type-snake-thing.”

The stranger snarled, flashing a mouth full of teeth. “I am a man. And it has been a dramatic week.”

Tako said nothing. For a man of his size, he did an amazing job of blending into the background. 

Lira pressed Karen, “Who is your quarry?”

Karen took in the group once more. His gaze paused a fraction longer on Thane’s coat where the book was hidden, then moved on.

“A man who moves like he expects doors to stay locked behind him,” he lamented. “Quick hands. Pleasant voice. Thinks charm is the same thing as mercy.”

“Sounds terrible,” Zerai said with a grin. She feigned fanning her face with her hand.

“It is.”

He reached into his coat, and Thane’s hand dropped at once to his axe. Karen noticed almost out of courtesy. What he brought out was not a weapon but a folded strip of parchment, broken red wax flaking at the edges where the seal had been forced. He laid it on the counter in front of the clerk.

Lira saw enough before the woman dragged it closer. The writ had a sum scrawled beneath the name large enough to make honest work feel stupid.

“Karen asked, “Was he here?”

The clerk lowered her eyes to the paper and said nothing.

“Did he come through your routes?”

Still nothing.

Then Elora spoke, her voice low and level enough to cut across the room without forcing anyone to acknowledge how sharply it did so. “If he had, would you drag him out in chains, or simply tally him where the ink dries faster?”

Karen turned to her. “At present,” he said, “I’d settle for catching up.”

Tako’s gaze went from the writ to the man holding himself so still beside it. “Hunter follows fox,” he murmured.

Karen looked at him and gave the slightest nod. “Yes. He’s crossing too many trails.”

Lira felt the chapter of the city close in around that sentence. Vale. The grathok. The signet ring. The office. Whatever routes carried dangerous things from one discreet hand to the next. Somewhere inside all of it, someone fast enough to make everyone else feel late.

“What’s his name?”

Karen’s eyes came back to Lira. “Kal. Kal Orhain.” He took the writ back from the clerk, folded it once, and slipped it into his coat. “If he touches your business, don’t treat it like theft.” His gaze moved over them, then over the room, then settled nowhere visible at all. “He doesn’t steal what glitters. He takes what he means to use.”

The clerk behind the desk made the mistake of swallowing audibly.

Karen shifted his attention to her. “Tell Vale something for me.”

She said nothing.

“He may call it caution when he leaves other people to trip the line first.” Karen’s voice did not rise. “It still smells like fear.”

Then he turned and left. Only after he was gone did the room remember how to breathe.

Zerai let out hers first. “Well. I hate him.”

The clerk reopened the ledger with quiet, angry precision.

Lira stepped back from the counter. “We’re done here.”

The woman in green sleeves did not answer. She only lowered her eyes to the page.

They went back into the street. Kaethar had not changed. That was the problem. Men still bartered over crates of figs. A fishwife still shouted at a carter who had stopped too near her stall. Sunlight still struck the upper windows hard enough to hurt the eyes, yet somehow the whole city felt more arranged than it had an hour ago. Every clean brass plate, every sealed docket, every bored clerk behind a polished counter belonged to the same body, and they just watched one part of it twitch.

Thane broke the silence first. “Well,” he said through clenched teeth, “I liked the wizard better when he was the only bastard in town.”

Elora had gone quiet again. She walked with her arms folded, shoulders tight. Lira watched her for a few steps, then said, “You’re thinking too hard.”

“No,” Elora answered. “I’m thinking exactly hard enough.”

She stopped near the mouth of the lane and looked back toward the office they had just left. “Malakar is dangerous, but he doesn’t hide inside procedure. That much was clear the moment we met him. This is worse in a different way. The city has made a system of not knowing. Roues, offices, handlers, claims. Everyone keeps their hands clean by passing the thing along until it belongs to someone else. At least with Malakar, the danger has a face.”

Tako’s brow lowered. “Pack hunt.”

Elora nodded once. “Yes. And if we keep standing here, all we’re doing is giving it more time to circle.”

Lira looked out at the traffic moving past the lane, then toward the cooper’s yard where the grathok waited under straps and gathering interest. The road ahead wasn’t any clearer than before. If anything, they simply understood how little they could trust it.

“We learned something useful,” she said.

Thane snorted. “That everyone with a desk is a coward?”

“That the city is not safer than Malakar,” Elora said. “Only wider.”

Zerai scrubbed a hand over her face. “Wonderful. Our options have matured from bad to institutional. She let her hands fall forward, palms up. In one, a tiny man ran three frantic steps before a wagon rolled over him and kept going. In the other, the same man stood glowering beside an iron ball chained to his ankle, trapped in place while the world passed him by.

Lira turned back toward the yard. “Then we stop pretending standing still is caution.”

The grathok was waiting where they left it, broad and ugly beneath the leaning fence, with the two mules standing in front of the sledge, worn and resigned, bearing a burden that was not theirs. One of them flicked an ear when Thane came up beside it. He rubbed the bridge of its nose once, rough but not unkind, then stepped past and put his hand on the rear rail. The wood answered with a tired creak.

“Well,” he said, eyeing the carcass and giving it a tentative tap with his hand, “I’ve had better plans.”

Zeari came around the other side and peered at the loosened strap, checking whether it had shifted again while they were gone. “Name one.”

“I don’t owe you happiness and a list.”

“Road still there,” Tako said.

Lira looked at him. “That your way of saying we move?”

Tako nodded.

Elora stopped beside the sledge without touching it. The city moved beyond the fence in little flashes of color and noise. Vale had been real. The clerk had been real. Votary Karen had been real. So had the silence that followed all three. She drew a slow breath and let it go. “If we wait,” she said, “We are not buying ourselves a better answer. We are only giving more people time to decide what this is worth to them.”

“No shortage there,” Thane muttered.

Lira ran her hand once along the runner, feeling the splintered grain bite at her palm. “We know enough now.”

Zerai glanced up. “We do?”

“We know the city has hands in this.” Lira looked toward the lane. “We know some of them were already moving before we got here. And we know none of them have offered us anything leaner than Malakar.”

Thane shifted. “So we’re back to the wizard.”

“No,” Elora said quietly. “We’re back to the choice we were trying to avoid.”

The difference mattered. Lira could see that it mattered. She took her place at the front. “Get the straps checked. Then we move.”

This time, there was no argument. No fresh debate. Tako bent to check the front harness while Thane hauled the rear rail up just enough for Zerai to tighten the loosened band without losing a finger. Elora came alongside Lira and put her shoulder where the wood would take it.

Behind them, Kaethar went on shouting to itself. Ahead, the road bent back toward Malakar’s tower, the late light sliding down the stone and turning the upper windows into dull brass. Between the two sat the grathok, heavy on the sledge, ugly as ever, mules shifting and stamping in the dust.

Lira looked once toward the tower, then at the market crowd still moving around them in quick, practiced currents. “We need the carcass tended,” she said. “We also need to stop making decisions hungry.”

“That,” Thane said, “is the first intelligent thing anybody’s said since the office.”

Zerai glanced sideways at him. “You said you wanted to burn the carcass.”

“I stand by that instinct.”

Elora let out the faintest breath of laughter and rubbed one thumb against the edge of the symbol at her belt. The sound was small, but it loosened something in the group. 

Tako shifted the sledge beam in one hand and looked toward the market. “Food first,” he said. “Then wizard.”

Thane nodded. “Good. Meat. Bread. Beer. Preferably in quantities large enough to insult somebody.”

“Why does your plan sound like it was made by a man who thinks chewing is a strategy?” Zerai asked.

“It is a strategy. Keeps you from talking.”

Lira cut across them before the bickering could get its feet under it. “Options.”

Zerai brightened at once. “Now that is a city word.” She pointed deeper into the market. “Spice row has those skewers the size of short swords, plus the fried peppers that look like they’d make Thane cry.”

“I don’t cry!”

“There’s also a dumpling stall near the cloth quarter where the woman behind the pot looks like she’s stabbed at least one customer this week, which usually means the food is excellent.”

“Or poisoned,” Elora added.

“Only if you ask too many questions.”

Thane jerked his chin toward a broader street farther upslope. “I saw a tavern with shutters open and a boar painted on the sign. That means stew, pies, and ale in cups made thick enough to break a gnome’s jaw.” Zerai blew a loud, irreverent raspberry up at him, then with a flick of her fingers traced a quick sigil in the air; blue light gathered, coalescing into a translucent, spectral hand that snapped into being with a faint shimmer and promptly flicked Thane’s ear before dissolving into motes.

“That also means noise,” Elora said quietly. And staring. And someone deciding we’ve brought the grathok close enough to biome supper.

Tako looked past them all toward a lane that curved out of the market crush. “Smokehouse near the drovers’ yard,” he said. “Less talk. More meat. Room for mules.”

That gave them all pause. Zerai spread her hands. “So our choices are: delicious danger, loud danger, or practical danger.”

Thane grunted. “Finally, a menu that understands us.”

Elora looked at Lira. “Wherever we stop, we don’t stop long.”

“No,” Lira said. Her eyes lifted once more toward the tower, then back to the city between. “We eat, we water the mules, we move.”

Zerai smiled, half wicked and half tired. “Alright, what’s it gonna be?”


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