Short Story – Magical Realism / Literary Fiction
The old guitar sat quietly in the corner of the music shop, its strings dusty, tuning pegs rusted, and body chipped with wear. Day after day, customers walked past it, their fingers grazing newer, shinier instruments. It had been years since its last owner had strummed a chord. Forgotten, the guitar’s dreams of echoing melodies and dancing notes faded into a dull silence, leaving it with only memories of the songs it had once sung.
Claire stepped into the shop, shaking off the droplets of the afternoon rain from her worn, blue raincoat. Her eyes scanned the shelves, landing on the pristine rows of polished guitars, each one a promise of the music waiting for fulfillment. She was looking for something specific to replace her last guitar, shattered in a fit of despair the week before. It had been a long time since Claire felt the joy of playing music, but something about that day felt different, like a chord she could almost hear but not yet play.
Claire’s fingers brushed across the gleaming guitars as she moved through the store, but none felt right. She closed her eyes, taking in the scent of varnished wood and aged leather. Then, as if beckoned by some unseen force, her gaze drifted toward the battered guitar hidden in the corner, nearly swallowed by the shadows of forgotten shelves.
“That one’s been here forever,” said the shopkeeper, a grizzled man with glasses perched on the end of his nose. “It’s… probably not what you’re lookin’ for.”
Claire approached it regardless, kneeling to look closer. There was a certain sadness to it, yet it felt oddly alive—carrying secrets only someone willing to listen could uncover. She reached out, fingers trembling as they made contact with the worn neck. A warmth seeped into her palm, surprising her. “May I try it?” she asked softly.
The shopkeeper shrugged, his voice softening a little. “Sure, knock yourself out.”
Lifting the guitar gently, Claire felt its weight settle into her arms as if it had been waiting for her all this time. She positioned her fingers along the frets and strummed a chord. It rang out hollow and thin, but beneath the tired strings was a soul that pulsed with life. She tuned it by ear, coaxing it back into harmony, and began to play a melody she hadn’t touched in years: her mother’s lullaby.
The guitar responded. Each note grew fuller and deeper, like a well that had suddenly found water again. The song unfolded, one note tumbling after another, and as Claire played, she could feel the years of silence fall away from the instrument. Her fingers moved in a dance they had long forgotten but never truly lost. For the first time in what felt like an eternity, she closed her eyes and was back in her childhood room, singing into the late hours of the night, her mother’s voice twinning with her own, a harmony that wrapped her in warmth and safety.
The shopkeeper stood still, watching the transformation. “It sounds like you found it,” he said, his usual gruffness gone from his voice.
Claire stopped playing and looked down at the guitar. She felt a pang of connection, like meeting an old friend after years apart. “Oh, uh, yes,” she whispered, “I’ll take it.”
The weeks that followed were some of the most transformative Claire had ever known. Each day, she played the guitar, and each day, it revealed something new. She poured her thoughts, her dreams, and her loneliness into its strings, and in return, it gave her a language more honest than words: music. Her fingers danced over the fretboard as if they had been waiting all their lives to find this guitar.
One night, as the wind howled outside her apartment and the city buzzed below like a restless symphony, Claire found herself playing on her balcony beneath a sea of twinkling stars. She was working on a new piece, a melody that had come to her in the middle of a dream and stayed with her like a whisper he couldn’t quite make out. The chords were soft and delicate, but there was a haunting edge, a yearning that resonated deep within her.
Then, the guitar changed. The air around her seemed to shimmer, and the wood of the guitar felt almost warm to the touch as if it were coming alive in her hands. The strings resonated with a power and richness she had never heard before, and the music that poured out was unlike anything she had ever played. It was somehow familiar, yet not her own.
As the notes filled the night air, they wove a tapestry of love, longing, and unspoken dreams—a story told not through words but through sound. It was in that moment that Claire felt a presence around her, something older than she was, something deeply connected to the music.
Many decades before, the guitar had been the pride and joy of a young man named Samuel, who had played on the streets of New Orleans. His music filled the warm southern nights, bringing joy and solace to anyone who happened to hear it. Every evening, as Samual played beneath the streetlights, there was Lilly—his muse, his love. Lily painted the world in color, while Samuel painted it in sound. The two of them were dreamers, weaving their passions into a dance of art and music.
One night, beneath a canopy of stars, Samuel played a song he had written just for Lily—a song of love and hope, filled with the promise of forever. Lily, seated beside him with her canvas and paints, moved her brush in time with the music, capturing the rhythm and soul of the moment. When Samuel finished, he took her hand and asked her to marry him, his voice trembling like the strings of his guitar.
Fate, cruel and relentless, had other plans however. Just weeks before their wedding, Lily fell ill. Samuel watched helplessly as the light in her eyes faded, and she passed. The music inside of him died with her that night. He couldn’t bear to play the guitar without her; it felt empty, wrong. He set it aside, leaving it to gather dust, a silent relic of a love story left unfinished.
Claire could feel all of this—the love, the loss, the longing for something unattainable—each time she played. The guitar seemed to pour its story into her, and in return, she breathed new life into it. Her songs grew richer, more complex as if they were co-written by the ghosts of its past.
When Claire played at the open mic night, standing in the dim light of a tiny stage with the guitar in her hands, she poured all of her heart into a song that had been growing inside her for weeks. The audience sat in rapt attention as she strummed the opening chords, the haunting melody filling the small cafe with an intimacy that made everyone feel like they were the only patrons there.
The song told of love found and lost, of dreams deferred but not forgotten. Claire’s voice quivered with emotion, and the guitar answered with a resonance that touched the very soul of everyone listening. The notes climbed higher, intertwining like lovers’ hands before falling back down, soft and tender, into a bittersweet goodbye.
When she finished, the room was silent, heavy with the weight of unspoken emotion. Then came the breaking wave of applause. Claire stood there, stunned, the guitar cradled in her arms. She had finally come home.
As she walked back to her apartment that night, the guitar slung over her shoulder, she felt a peace she had not known in years. It was as if the instrument had shared its story with her and, in doing so, had given her the courage to tell her own.
Years later, Claire would stand on the stage of a packed concert hall, the old guitar still at her side, polished and well-loved. As she played the songs born of dreams and memories, the audience sat entranced, wrapped in the haunting melodies that seemed to carry stories from another world. Each note echoed with life, loss, and love found anew. Claire felt the guitar resonate deeply as she struck the final chord. And though Claire had written the songs herself, she knew deep down that the music belonged to the guitar as much as it did to her—a shared story between musician and instrument, reborn with every strum of the strings.
Author’s Note
This piece came from thinking about the objects we keep and the ones that somehow keep us. Music has carried me through some of the hardest moments in my life, and the guitar in this story became a symbol of the memories that shape us, even when we try to bury them. Writing it felt like tuning an old part of myself back into harmony.
Art: PV Productions
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